HELP!

well im think about writting a book, yeah i know sounds kinda weird, and stupid but i think it would be pretty fun and interesting.
i've already writting chapter 3, well some of it.
im gonna post it.
tell me what you think
PLEASE be HONEST!



Lexiie and Melissa have been bestfriends for a LONG time. And Lexiie has to move again. So her mom is looking at this house out in Pefferlaw where Melissa lives. Her mom end’s up buying the house, and Lexiie and Melissa are really happy about it. One day on a Saturday Melissa and her boyfriend Christian come over to Lexiie’s house, totally unexpected, Lexiie lets them in and they hang out for a bit, just randomly talking, and hearing about the new stuff in each other’s lives. Then outta nowhere Melissa and Christian start making out and Lexiie has nothing to do. “ Kay, you guys! Wtf, where’s my boyfriend!?*sniff**tear*” said Lexiie. Melissa stopped making out with christian and starts laughing, Lexiie and Christian join in.

Then the door bell rings, and Lexiie goes to answer it. She open’s the door and was shocked at what she sees. It’s Christian’s hot friend Keegan. So Lexiie lets him and he follows her. They go and sit on the couch across from Melissa and Christian. “Dude I didn’t even think you were gonna show up, good to see you bro.” Christian said “Yo dude, yeah I told you I was gonna come” Keegan said. Lexiie and Melissa just brusted out laughing, Christian and Keegan just looked at them weird.


Then Melissa and Christian were at it again! Lexiie and Keegan just looked at each other and started laughing. “So what do you want to do?” said Lexiie “Well we could talk, or make out. It’s up to you” Keegan said. Lexiie just bursted out laughing, “Whatever you prefer, I don’t mind.” Lexiie giggled. “Well I’m thinking that I would prefer to make out then to just talk, so I guess were gonna make out.” Keegan applied “Okay, I guess we know what were gonna do then.” Lexiie replied. Then Keegan took Lexiie’s face in his hands and kissed her lightly at first, then he started kissing her harder and then they just went at it.

Melissa and Christian stopped and stared at Lexiie and Keegan with confusion. Lexiie got the feeling that she was being watched so she pulled away slowly. Then turned to look at Melissa and Christian. She didn’t realize that she had gotten so close to Keegan when she was making out with him, she was practically sitting on his lap, she started giggling, then asked why there were staring at them. “ What were you guys doing?” Asked Melissa “making out.” Keegan replied.
Lexiie wasn’t looking at Keegan but she could hear say it with happiness, she wasn’t complaining.

Then they all just started talking again, and outta no where Keegan asked Lexiie out, and she said yes. So she got what she wanted, and that made her happy. Melissa could tell that Lexiie was happy and that made her smile towards her bestfriend.